SEQUENCE ONE
Lodging house. The Reverend Roger Storm, graduate of Harvard Divinity School. He appears a bit priggish, but in reality is a well meaning, nice young chap, though dead serious so far as his religion is concerned.
In the same lodging house lives Susy Rooney. Susy is a product of the Barbary Coast, inasmuch as she was actually born there, her father being the owner of one of the gilded palaces--a combination saloon and dance-hall. We bring out that all Susy’s memories of Barbary Coast are pleasant ones. The painted ladies and fashionable gentleman whom she saw in her father’s establishment as a child were her first idols. She is awfully sore because her father insists on her living away from his own place of business, where he has apartment. Big Bill Rooney, her father, thinks that she is safely tucked away in a convent--as we bring out in a line or two of dialogue--when in reality she has escaped from the Dominican Convent across the bay in San Rafael and is blowing the liberal allowance her father has always prodigally settled on her. She is having a whale of a good time and has gathered about her a number of kindred spirits. Susy, who declares she was raised on whiskey while other kids had milk, always has plenty of booze in her rooms, and she and her friends keep up an eternal
22and infernal racket. (According to the young Reverend Roger Storm). She is her father’s own child--sometimes these parties of hers run on till as late as the appalling hour of eleven o’clock!
Much to his irritation, and to Susy’s amusement, the young minister and the girl are always meeting on the stairs or in other parts of the lodging-house. Susy never fails to make some audible comment, not especially flattering to Roger’s cloth and dignity. He in turn considers her unregenerate and hopeless. Susy looks upon him as a joke. He catches her making fun of him and ‘taking him off’ behind his back to her friends, in the lodging-house parlor. He is furious with himself, because he cannot get her off his mind, and finally decides that it is his bounded duty to save her.
Susy throws one of her parties, that night, in her rooms, and at the height of the festivities Roger hammer upon the door and threatens the merry-makers with the police. Their ungodly noises are not to be endured, he feels. They all razz him. Susy, who is simply having a good time who appears to the minister to be drunk, ugesurges her friends to muss his pretty clothes. He refuses to fight, because of his dignity, and goes out with her taunts of “Coward! White-liver!” ringing in his burning ears. They throw shoes and botless bottles at him--one of Susy’s slippers following him out into the hall. He picks up the slipper, looks at it thoughtfully, and carries it with him down to his room. One of the girl’s friends suggests that they all go to his “prayer-dive”--his Midnight Mission, which he conducts in a dilapidated store-room for the benefit of drunkards and bums, and raise a rumpus there.
The minister decides that he will move away. He is very much respected by his landlady, and when he gives her notice as he goes out on his way to the Mission, she declares that she’ll clean out all the undesirable element in the house rather than have him leave.
SEQUENCE TWO
(continued)
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SEQUENCE TWO
This is a Midnight Mission, down in a squalid part of the city--“South of The Slot,” as it is called in San Francisco. We show the minister not preaching, but feeding, a long queue of the riff-raff of slum San Francisco. Into this place, now, comes Susy and about three of her men friends and a couple of women. They are all a little lit, and ready for anything in the way of fun. One of the men starts for the little barrel-organ in the corner, and they all begin to sing “Ta Ra Ra Boom-de-ay” and other wild songs of the period, and prance and dance about the place. We will go into the detail of the general effect here. The minister herds his men into an adjoining room, comes back, and in a quiet level voice--very loud and clear--says, “I shall give you exactly two minutes to leave this place!” They all roar with laughter, and the men lurch towards him belligerently. Rogers watches the clock, and when exactly two minutes have passed
he
hurls one of the men through the door. A fight follows, three against one, in which he puts out the whole crew of them. Susy, astonished at seeing it turn out this way and secretly impressed by the prowess of the minister, lingers a moment, when he takes her by the shoulder and says, “Now you clear out too!” and pushes her out. This enrages her. She thrusts the door open and shouts defiance at him: “You’re not only a prig, you’re a bully!”
SEQUENCE THREE
The lodging-house again. Susy, returning, finds her baggage out on the sidewalk. She rings the bell angrily and arouses the landlady, who tells her that she won’t have trash like her driving away respectable people such as the fine young minister. Susy is in a fine rage. She screams insults, and throws a brick through the window--the minister’s window. He has not returned yet. She is firmly convinced that it is the minister who has had her ejected.
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The minister returns late at night from his Mission. We see him sitting in his room disconsolately. He picks up the little feminine slipper and fondles it. He is thinking--he talks aloud to himself--of what the girl called him. “Prig. Bully!” Is he no more than a well-meaning but stupid prig? he asks himself. This train of thought is running through his mind when the landlady knocks at his door and announces to him self-satisfiedly, “That low hussy’ll never bother you again, sir. I threw her out in the stree.”--He is astounded, and is angry with the woman for having thrown a girl out into the streets to almost certain ruin there. “Ah, she came from the streets, and she can go back to ‘em, the Barbary Coast scum!” the landlady says. The young minister is appalled by the realization that if the girl does go to the bad, the responsibility lies solely on his own shoulders. Worse, he is now face to face with the undeniable fact that he is in love with Susy--the wild beautiful creature.
SEQUENCE FOUR
The Barbary Coast--dimly-lighted streets, lurking shadows. The brilliantly-lighted front of Tim Rooney’sgaudy saloon--The Lucky Shamrock. We see Big Tim Rooney’s mistress, a passionate cheap girl named Magda, a prey to her own emotions, which are like dynamite. We establish the clientele of the saloon, and indicate a few ladies of easy virtue sitting around. Rooney is stunned as he suddenly see his own daughter sitting at one of the tables, regarding him with a mischievous smile. He takes her into his office--literally by the ear.
NOTE:
We can play this scene almost to its finish before letting the audience know that Susy is Tim’s daughter and not his mistress. We can get in some very good dialogue.Tim says, “What are yez doing here, ye shameless young baggage. Ain’t I paying good money to get ye eddicated at a convent?” And Susy replying, “The Barbary Coast’s all the convent I want! You just want to have all the fun yourself.”
Now we cut from this comic scene directly to tragedy. Magda, Tim’s mistress, has overheard the conversation and storms into the office.
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Magda glares from Suzzie to Tim.
“What the hell do you mean butting in on my oman?”
Her answer, Suzzie throws back her head and bursts out laughing.
Big Timroars:
“This ain’t a proper woman for you to be speaking to, Suzzie.” “You get on out of here!”
This infuriates Magda:
“Oh, I’m not good enough, eh?” and leaps at Suzzie. She had bitten off more than she can chew for Suzzie is more than a match for her. Tim tries vainly to separate them. All the time, as they fight, Suzzie is laughing and jeering ‘till suddenly the goaded Magda draws a knife. It is then Tim seizes her by the back of her neck and swings her around “So you’ll
take
use
a knife, will ya--
to
my gal.”
With that he flings her clear across the room. She falls in a huddled heap. She comes then to her knees and starts screaming and this brings everyone in the place on the run to the door. Someone turns in a police alarm. Tim is once again the huge, dominating, bouncer. He roars to everyone: “Clear out of here--all us youse!”
We CUT TO the police station and pick up our Minister here. He has been trying to get aid in finding Suzzie. The police suggest: “If you want to see some real fun, come along.”
Here’s
a riot call for Rooney’s joint--the toughest place on Barbary.
We CUT BACK TO Rooney’s and we show Magda screaming as she points to Suzzie and cries to the hovering crowd: “She tried to take my man from me!”A fit of coughing stop her. We see Suzzie look at her and then hurry to her side. She is now all compunction, as she says to Magda: “Ah, he’s nothin’ but my Dad.”
Just the we hear the
police whistle
arrival
of the Police Wagon (Black Maria) and several of the bravest spring from the wagon.
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Roger is with them. As they come into the place, we see everyone scattering and almost in a flash the place is empty. The police however, move across the now deserted dance hall to where the roaring voice of Tim Rooney is heard. He is demanding that Sussie clear out and be damn quick about it
As the police break in the door, Rooney has the foresight to shove Suzzie through
an opening
a trap door
that is behind the
door
bar
of the main dance hall.
“You stay there,” he says, “or I’ll brain you with a bung-starter!”
The police take Rooney. He goes off fighting and cursing and damning them all. He is bundled into the Black Maria. The Minister has paused to look around the disheveled and now empty place and suddenly a bottle comes flying through the air just missing his head. It has come from behind the bar and presently Suzzie’s head arises. A stream of her father’s characteristic profanity pours from the fighting virago.
“You God Damned Dirty psalm-singing, sneaking, prayer-babbling coot! I suppose it wasn’t enough to get me thrown out of my lodgings--but you had to come here and
get the
only man in the world I love, arrested by the police!”
Roger tries to hold his dignity. He says: “My child, I have done my duty. Are you aware that this man you say you love is one of the most notorious and infamous characters in San Francisco?”
The irate girl replies: “You aren’t fit to lick his boots! You say one more word about him or I’ll brain you!”--She raises a bottle menacingly.
Roger stands his ground: “My heart aches for you, poor little lost lamb. If I could I would give my life to save you.” He says.
“Oh tell it in heaven,” she replies.
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“But,” he continues, “I thank God that at least I have been the instrument of closing this
infernal
brothel.”
Suzzie comes out from behind the bar, her two fists on her hips. She picks up one of her father’s big black cigars and chucks it into her mouth.
“Is that so,” says Suzzie. “Just come around here tomorrow and see what you’ll see, darling.”
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SEQUENCE FIVE
Show a mass meeting in some hall.
Reputable citizens of San Francisco, Civic elements, W.C.T.U., etc. represented. Besides
inflammable
types.
We show the Minister addressing the meeting. He is eloquent and deadly earnest. We bring out in this speech, parts of which we hear, that he is telling them of the iniquity of the Barbary Coast. There, so he says, sin flourishes and is cultivated as in the days of
Sodom and Gomorrah
. There the white slaver thrives and very young girls become the victims of drugs and drink. He describes
the face of
a girl
whom he declares has the face of an angel and says it is a crime that her soul should be sold into sinful bondage.
As he describes the girl, there fades in before him, the face of Lily.
His fiery address has the same effect upon the audience as an
evangelistic
revival meeting. Everybody wants to do something to wipe out the scourge defacing the fair city of San Francisco.
Show now in Lap Dissolves the wheels of moral justice beginning to move.
A delegation before the Mayor of the City, San Francisco. The Minister presenting a petition signed by important residents. The Mayor is asked to lend his power for a thorough and drastic cleansing of the Barbary Coast.
We LAP DISSOLVE to U.F.A. Camera shot of half a dozen huge newspaper presses. Through this we reveal that the press is hot behind the moment.
Show POLICE HEADQUARTERS with the Chief of Police shouting his orders to every officer to get in line for the greatest raid in the history of the City. He says: “Give them women five minutes to pack and clear out!”
Have one police say: “Where’ll we drive them to, Chief?”
“Hell--anywhere--everywhere. Take ‘em to the docks and pack them on the first ship that leaves!”
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SEQUENCE SIX
Give a great shot of the whole of the brightly lighted Barbary coast. It is running full blast.
CUT TO: Rooney’s place. Here everything running as usual but now Lily is behind the bar and dominating the place. We bring out in dialogue with one of the helpers, that Tim is expected back and that
Lily
feels vindictive against the Minister because Tim has had to pay a heavy fine as well as having spent some time in jail. As she serves the drinks to the men and thumps the over-flowing glasses down, the men asked her: “When’ll Timbe back?” etc.
And it’s here that we can bring out where he is. Also that the men say that the place won’t be the same when she’s gone.
Lily says: “I ain’t going.”
“Tim’ll never let ya stay.”
Lily says: “Oh, won’t he. When he gets back, he’ll see whose boss here.”
CUT TO the street and show the outsides of a row of houses with red lights outside.(We can spot-color these).
Show the police going from place to place. Screams come from within as one after another prostitutes are driven into the street. This is the beginning of the raid.
BACK TO the Rooney place. A breathless chink suddenly bursts into the place and makes his way to Lily. He tries to tell her something and we get in a typical Chinese sentence which, to the audience, will be comprehensible, but which Lily cannot make head or tail off. It will read something like this:
“Allee sameee police he tak rice white ladies down street side. Hully click all sammee go boat side!”
Lily says: “Can’t ya see I’m busy? Run along now Chum Lee, don’t bother me.”
CUT BACK TO STREET and show outside the Rooney place the Minister. He is looking in through the window and his glance rests somewhat wistfully on Lily, leaning across the bar and flirting with some good looking tough. Roger grits his teeth and stalks into the place. He stands back a moment surveying the sinful scene.
1010 Suddenly Lily sees him as she screaches with derisive laughter. Pointing her finger at him she screams:
“Well, if our sweet little praying Willie-boy hasn’t come back. Guess he wants to see us to the hoochie-coochie. Come on over here Willie.”
Roger makes his way through the roar of the crowd. He stops before the bar and surveys her with intense solemnity. He says: “My child. Can you not see the writing on the wall? I warn you that as sure as God Almighty destroyed
Sodom and Gomorrah
, so will he blast this place of sin and wipe out scarlet women who lure men to the depths of destruction.”
Lily pretends to be terribly impressed. She says: “Oh gosh! What do you think he’ll do to me? Ya know I’m scarlet too! That’s what they call me,--Scarlet Lily. But you ought to see the whole of me. I ain’t so red underneath.”
She leaps upon the bar. Putting her hands to her mouth she bawls to the leader of the bank: “Gimme some music,” she says. Then winking at the Minister, “Watch me do the hoochie-coochie.”
She wears the
short spangled dress of the dance hall and she dances like a devil. The whole place is in an uproar, applauding and roaring with laughter and approval. Some of them are dancing and moving suggestively too.
CUT BACK TO STREET and show that the police have now rounded up
an
a
score of all the women. We get in all the funny detail and business, all kinds of types, some go fighting, some resignedly along. Some try to vamp the police, etc.
BACK to the Rooney place and show the Chinamen running from one to another. Get a shrill line from him as he speaks to one of the girls who is the first to comprehend what he means. She screams to the others that those darned blue ribbon crowd had won out. Lily is in the midst of her dance when she sees that some sort of panic has seized everyone in the dance hall. There is scurrying and scuttling in every direction. Magda runs up to her and cries breathlessly:
1111 “Lily! For God sake--clear out! They say the coppers
are
cleanin’ up the whole of Barbary Coast and they’ll be here before we know it!”
Lily has stopped dancing. She whirls around and her glance goes straight to the minister. “So! You and the coppers are in cahoots, heh? Well I’ll show you a thing or two!”
With that she begins to bark orders to her people and we see everybody rushing to pile tables and chairs
of
and
all kinds of articles to barricade doors and windows. The rough necks of the dive and the women too seize every kind of weapon
and
from
carving knives to chair legs, bottles, glasses, doorknobs, anything.
Lily says to the Minister: “Now you! You gave me two minutes to clear out of your dive! I’ll give you one to get outta mine!”
He looks at her steadily, apparently unafraid and he replies: “Lily, my child, I will stay here to protect you.”
At that she bursts out laughing: “Me?--The Scarlet Lily don’t need no protection from a hymn-
drewing
parson.”
With that she lets fly a glass of liquor from which she had been drinking as she danced. Hardly as the glass left her hand when we hear the hammering upon the doors of the police.
The raid follows. Detailed description and the breaking in of the place and the terrific fight between the police and her people after the police break in.
The police of course, have the advantage and soon have the toughs subdued and drive them before them. Lily is just about to dart back into the private rooms when a big copper grabs her. She fights for her freedom. The copper handles her none too gently when the indignant minister intervenes.
“Officer, what do mean by holding that girl’s arm like that?”
The police replies: “Aw--keep out of this.”
The minister says:
“Do you know who I am? I’m at the head of this vice crusade.” “I order you!” The police contemptuously
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A mob
of
surges
in between the Minister and Lily. The Minister tries to fight his way through.
BACK to the street. Here is seen, almost
beggaring
description. We see herded along like cattle a tumbling parade of the Barbary Coast
prostitutes
. They are in all manner of dress and undress. Crowds of people
surge
around them and the police have to clear a passage for them along the streets.
Beating his way through the dense throng we see big Tim Sullivan. He is hatless and breathless. We see him come outside his own place and for a moment he stands stock still, staring at the broken doors and smashed windows. He whirls around like a bated bull and begins to bellow to the crowds about him: “Where’s my Lily--where’s my girl?!”
No one pays any attention to him.
CUT BACK TO the parade of women and show, plodding along with the prostitutes, Lily. We pause a moment to see that she is helping along and almost carrying another woman. This is the weak Magda who has just had a
hemorrhage
. We show the great tenderness of Lily here.
CUT BACK TO TIM and show the minister beside him. Tim is now almost beside himself.
“My gal! My gal! Where’s my Lily!”--he howls.
Suddenly he sees the parson looking at him. Tim says: “Mr. Minister--have you seen anything o’ my gal?”
The minister replies sternly: “Are you referring to that sinful woman known as ‘The Scarlet Lily’?”
Tim replies almost pitifully: “My Lily ain’t sinsul--she’s nothin’ but a kid.”
The minister says: “With God’s help I pray that I may pluck this sinful brand from the burning fire.”
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At that Tim grasps his arm: “Wholly saints, don’t tell me there’s any burning about my Lily.--Why, she’s all the gal I’ve got. Her mother died when she was born and we didn’t have no other children!”
The Minister takes this big. It dawns upon him that Tim is Lily’s father.
“You mean she’s your daughter?”
“Sure she is. The only child I ever had. Oh wirra, wirra!”
The minister takes his arm-- “My poor fello,” he says. “I’ve done you a great wrong. Tell me about --Lily.”
“Sure--and she’s a good girl,” says Tim. “It’s meself who tried to keep her away from all this but she was born on the Barbary and she thought the place was grant and b’gorra it is!”
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SEQUENCE SEVEN
This is to be at dawn and at the grey, sultry, foggy atmosphere we see the hulks of the shipping in the
docks
. We will then show the subdued, long line of the prostitutes. This sequence, into which we will not go in detail here, takes in the earthquake and shows the scattering of the women. Some are killed--some escape.
SEQUENCE EIGHT
This covers after the earthquake, a public park where the refugees are being cared for, foremost among them is Roger and his cheif lieutenant is Big Tim. We will show the minister feeding and caring for the destitute and homeless thousands. We will show Lily in the long line of people going up for her dole coffee and bread. One of the women workers hand
this
these
to Lily. We will show her running back to some little place. She swipes a shawl from someone and scuttles out of sight ‘till she comes to where Magda is lying on the ground. She puts the shawl around Magda, feeds her. Magda says weakly:
“If only I could have a drop of real liquor.”
“I’ll get you some,” says Lily, “don’t worry. I heard there’s a regular guy whose takin’ care of everyone here and I’m gonna get with him personally.”
We will show Lily coming up at the back of the minister who is in shirt sleeves with a big rough hat on his head. Someone has pointed him out to Lily. He has several days growth of beard on his face. A number of people are gathered around him and on the
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grass we see an old organ. A woman is sitting on an upturned
box
with her hands ready to strike the keys. Lily plucks the sleeve of the minister. He does not look at her. He says:
“One minute, you must wait your turn.”
Then he says, addressing the crowd: “Let us all join in singing: Safe in the Arms of Jesus.”
We see the organist’s hands begin the prelude and a big roaring voice with a wide open mouth, big Tim is starting the hymn. The minister turns, looks down at Lily while leading the music with his hand. His face is transfigured as he sees Lily. She looks up at him. He says the one word: “Lily!”
We see her eyes fill and then her lips move and the next we know, Lily is singing: “Safe In the Arms of Jesus.”
1. MED CLOSE ON ROGER’S ROOM INT1
In a severely furnished lodging-house room we see a young minister at a table, trying
to study the Bible. He presses his hands to his ears, with an expression of pain, as
he is prevented from reading by the never-ceasing racket of a party going on above
his head in a room on the next floor. The camera pans up quickly to:
2. CEILING OF THE ROOM.
An old fashioned gas chandelier, trembling with the impact of feet running about in
the room above. We hear the laughter and shouts of the people above, only slightly
dimmed by having to come through the thin plaster and flooring.
3. MED CLOSE FLOOR OF LILY’S ROOM INT
The upper half of the frame is black. In the lower half we see the feet of three
women and three men. A hat falls into the picture and is kicked by a laughing woman.
A bottle is thrown down with a thud. A glass falls and breaks and is crushed beneath
a man’s foot. One couple is dancing to the music of a tinny phonograph. Using the
feet alone -- together with laughter, drunken shouts, etc. on the sound track -- we
get over the drunken party going on.
4. FULL SHOT ROGER’S ROOM INT
Driven frantic by the racket, Roger shuts his Bible, rises -- trying to keep himself
from being angry -- takes his hat and starts to exit. As he starts for the door he
glances at his watch.
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5. LODGING HOUSE ENTRY HALL INT
A slavy is on her hands and knees with a duster. She is taking orders from the
stern-faced landlady as Roger walks into scene on his way to front door. The
landlady’s scowl turns into a smile.
LANDLADY
Good evening sir.
ROGER
(as he walks)
Good Evening Mrs. Harold.
LANDLADY
(admiringly)
Going to your mass meeting?
As Roger nods in affirmation there is a clatter as half a dozen people rush down the
staircase -- the party from Lily’s room. Flashily-dressed, half-drunk, they rush
between Roger and the landlady shouting and laughing. As the door is opened by the
first to reach it, we see a hack waiting outside for the party.
Roger has shrunk back against the wall -- pushed out of the way, but also with an
expression which tells us that he wishes to avoid the contaminating touch of the
roisterers. He is a bit priggish, which explains his disgust.
Lily, with her man, a flashily dressed ‘sport’, is the last of the party. As she
hurries through the scene she nods to the landlady cordially. As she passes within an
inch or two of Roger -- near enough for him to smell her perfume -- she
smiles pleasantly.
As Lily exits laughingly we see disgust and injured dignity on Roger’s countenance.
At the same time we sense that, whether he knows it or not, he is attracted in some
strange animal way to the resplendent, vital Lily. He almost shudders as he nods good
evening to the landlady and walks towards the door.